to start with the posts - will share my "once upon a time" kind of creativity... this was graduation year 2003 when there was a creative workshop that was organised in our college... i had presented my poem - here it goes...
it is a wonder to me
and it just makes me feel
whether i am so abysmal a being
who always has to run after others' heel.
sometimes it makes me cry
when i dont know the reason why
others say or do such hurting things
which affects my daily living
as the clock's hands go by ticking.
this all takes me to the prior question
which at the moment
takes all my attention
Am I such an abysmal being?
I dont aspire to be a
girl who's prim and proper
but can i ever have
the potential to carry out a murder -
the evils of life are
so difficult to kill
and there mere presence
makes me deathly ill
it takes time and patience
to fix the things, clear the air,
iron out the creases and straighten the fold
all that is needed is a very determined,
high resolved soul
which is persistent and oh-so-bold
but there is always a kind of helplessness
when you always have to guess and assess
what thought is racing through other
person's so precious a mind
whether is it shrewd and wicked
or so gentle and very kind.
then finally i seek the
advice of my conscience
which is more or less
telling this to me all the time
That to change everything
simply change your attitude
This would prove to be the
world's best Revolutionary Substitute.
and it just makes me feel
whether i am so abysmal a being
who always has to run after others' heel.
sometimes it makes me cry
when i dont know the reason why
others say or do such hurting things
which affects my daily living
as the clock's hands go by ticking.
this all takes me to the prior question
which at the moment
takes all my attention
Am I such an abysmal being?
I dont aspire to be a
girl who's prim and proper
but can i ever have
the potential to carry out a murder -
the evils of life are
so difficult to kill
and there mere presence
makes me deathly ill
it takes time and patience
to fix the things, clear the air,
iron out the creases and straighten the fold
all that is needed is a very determined,
high resolved soul
which is persistent and oh-so-bold
but there is always a kind of helplessness
when you always have to guess and assess
what thought is racing through other
person's so precious a mind
whether is it shrewd and wicked
or so gentle and very kind.
then finally i seek the
advice of my conscience
which is more or less
telling this to me all the time
That to change everything
simply change your attitude
This would prove to be the
world's best Revolutionary Substitute.
the reactions to this poem were - Mixed... the judges liked it... my friends loved the idea in it... and interestingly enough, through this poem i also found few people who were judging me as a person... that i was a very depressed kind of a person and i am thinking on the terms of killing some people on this earth - which is not at all the idea of the poem...
but as u know that there are so many different people and not everybody is good at understanding the idea behind the poetry... so u might also want to know what i did with these people's reactions... well i did nothing to explain anything or myself or my idea to them... :)
well so this was my awarded creation... will soon write about other important and not so important things...
Cheers!!!
but as u know that there are so many different people and not everybody is good at understanding the idea behind the poetry... so u might also want to know what i did with these people's reactions... well i did nothing to explain anything or myself or my idea to them... :)
well so this was my awarded creation... will soon write about other important and not so important things...
Cheers!!!
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