When I don't like things around me
I brood the people
When I don't approve of people around me
I damn the system
When I am new to the system
I feel something vicious is being planned
When I am old in the system
I gossip and do the same
When others gossip
I smell the fish
When they talk good about me
I am contented
When they rubbish me
I get offended
When I am ecstatically happy
I feel sick
When I am actually sick
I get melancholic
When people trust me
I fancy the feeling
When they have rough patches
I relish their misery
When they want me to help them
They become a burden
When they don't interact with me
I doubt myself - can't be undone
When I am in despair
I need a hand to guide
And a warm shoulder
But never thought of
returning this favor
'Cause I know
There's a jerk in you
But guess what
There's a bitch in me too...!!
To all Jerks and Bitches... Cheers..!!
-A
There's definitely a bitch in you! :P
ReplyDeleteBTW, what prompted you to write this?
Dear Anonymous.. i want to say thanks to your comment... :D
ReplyDeleteObserving people around helped me write this... so whats your take on it..??
- A
Ye kya bakwas hai
ReplyDeleteAbir ji, ye perspective ki baat hai...
ReplyDeleteBTW, aapko kya samajh aya...??
Yes Yes..m tired of Hypocricy ...n this post of urs is such a refreshing BREAK!!!
ReplyDeleteAnd indeed that's quite a bold acceptance of the fact that how self centered people have become... the world is full of Jerks n Bitches...but it takes some courage to outrightly accept it when what we keep doing most of the time is to present ourselves in best sugar coated manner we can no matter inside, all that lies there is a bitter n rotten core!!!
I guess this is the best piece of work of yours till date ...n u do deserve an applause for being BOLD enough to present the truth to others which is nothing but a reflection of them!!!
Thanks a ton Mon for the comment and appreciate you for understanding the way i wanted it to be presented..
ReplyDeleteThanks again... :)
awesome.......eye opening..:-)...are the words normally used by people to appreciate.But I would dwell more on literary aspect rather than the concept or thought. As anyone can think of a unique concept or idea but it requires real talent to be able to translate that thought in words, and here yet again you prove that the tumbler is brimming with talent.
ReplyDeleteI would once again emphasize the fact that poetry is your forte,stick to it.what is difficult for others, is something natural for you.
"poetry was created to appreciate/praise those flaws of human nature,which we hate but still cant live without them"
Wow.. thanks a lot.. thats quite an analysis - which i took into consideration the first time itself when you said so...
ReplyDeleteand this is "poetry was created to appreciate/praise those flaws of human nature,which we hate but still cant live without them" - absolutely great... :)